Can somebody please edit this for me?

I'm writhing an essay, and it just doesn't sound right( punctuation too):"Judgment and hatred can bring anybody down; any race, any gender, and any class, and that is exactly what prejudice is."

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One Answer to “Can somebody please edit this for me?”

  1. chestnuts says:

    Try this”Judgment and hatred can bring a person down due to and irregardless of race, gender, or class. This is exactly what prejudice is.”