I need some ideas and help with my expository writing essay. ?





The perfect school tries to keep save all students inside the campus. When the students are inside or outside they need to be safe and very important they may avoid risks such as being shouted, or something more dangerous. A good system security include cameras, civil police (they should be dressed as regular students so that students don’t know that they are polices), police dogs (they aren’t required but sometimes the police will need to bring them to make some drugs inspections out and in the entire campus). A few police men have to be walking, investigating, observing and talking with students so that they know what is going on in the school. Please give some ideas and help me to edit my essay. I am learning english and have too many grammar errors. Thanks



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One Answer to “I need some ideas and help with my expository writing essay. ?”

  1. snitching says:

    The perfect school tries to keep all students inside the campus safe . When the students are inside or outside they need to be safe, and it is super important that they avoid risks such as, being yelled at or something more dangerous. A good system security includes cameras, civil police (they should be dressed as regular students so that students don’t know that they are polices), police dogs (they are not required but sometimes the police will need to bring them to make some drugs inspections outside and inside the entire campus). A few police men have to be walking, investigating, observing and interacting with students so that they know what is going on in the school. I fixed some spelling errors and stuff, I also changed a couple of words to make your essay sound a little bit more interesting(i did not change the meaning of the words though i don’t know if thats what you wanted, lol.